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The sexy smell from your lusty flesh
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# Revised

Thank you Richard Vallance. I need your constructive criticism forever.I think they will help me in the long run since I am just a novice.

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Poem Artwork

In the severe darkness of the night
without cloistered synthetic lights
I see the desire shining in your eyes
as the moon sets up the sexy chime

The sexy smell from your lusty flesh
Gave a tinkle to my heart and knocked
Me down, when you sat on top of my lap
Caressing my hair with your lovely hand

Our hearts were beating soft and low
To the tunes of the sex augmented glow
Uncontrolled fleshes aroused us both
When we tangoed naked on the corridor

Aroma of majestic sex filled the room
As we stared into each others lusty eyes
I saw the reflection of the moon in your eyes
And whispered the words of love in your ears

You closed your eyes and trapped the moon
In the midst of your eyes, I was so delighted
That I embraced both you and the moon tightly
With the curvature of my sweltering cherry lips

Your sexy body mesmerized my heart, I then fondled
Your breast not with my hand, but with the tip of my
Tongue, you welcomed it with an arousing moan, and
I kept kissing your breast until you moaned no more

Slowly and seductively we caressed us in the dark
You over me and me under you with boiling desires
I then gave you a tighter hug and pulled you down
In the cozy bed and then kissed your every membrane

Suddenly you opened your eyes and set the moon
Loose, It hovered in the dark room for a while
Then hastily from the curtain hole it escaped out
And flew towards the dark sky waving us good bye



Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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 Reviews of "The sexy smell from your lusty flesh"
Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003

This is a very passionate write. It's enough to cause those to shy to write about such private things to blush.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2003
Bhuwan, this is beautiful.
Nico

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Excellent write Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
this gave me vivid images of two lovers lost in the fragrance and feel of each other. Well done. Soft, sensual and sexy.
Bobbi

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Smooth and excellent read.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Beautiful spicy write!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Hi Bhuwan,
All that I can say is
"WOW"
Outstanding write....

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Oh sultry and sensual excellent emotions Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Oh My....I need a cold shower. haha....Wonderfully written Bhuwan.

Marlene

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
passionate..Floreann

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Bhuwan this is passionate and gorgously written......and isn't that what poetry is all about...sharing and helping each other....Andre always pitches in and helps me out....this is fantastic as are all your writings....floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Beautiful passionate images Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Enjoyed the passionate images you have created in this write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Bhuwan, very well done.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Well done, Bhuwan. My study somehow got foggy -- can't figure it out. I think I'll open a window, now.

Carmen

Reviewed on October 31, 2003
This is truly wonderful. Excellent write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Do we now have a Poetic King of Romance and Love in AD?

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
You weave a magical spell, my friend..
EXCELLENT write!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Whew! Wow Bhuwan. That must have been some dream you had! Great write! It's a little warmer in the ole Den now! Lisa

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
I am SPEECHLESS to this, BHUWAN! C'est magnifique...

Your friend from India,
Debashish


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