Our Life (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

Very excellent story of life worded in a few lines of poetry, complete and expresive history of human life.

Greetings

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

Oof, buried in submerged thoughts, the mind starts wandering, and wondering. So many lives are like this, Bhuwan. Why is it so hard to open ourselves to the ones we love? You've got me thinking, now...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

Profound! Well done, Bhuwan; enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Veronica Hosking

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

Ironic and so true. Very nice write!

Veronica

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

I love this, Bhuwan - so much depth packed in these few words!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

So powerful Bhuwan, deeply moving,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

Very powerful, Bhuwan. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

..Bhuwan you have outdone yourself!!! Rxcellent..the truth rings clear in this piece...remarkable poetry..ty

vesna

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on November 3, 2003

Powerful, powerful, powerful, my friend!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

So well expressed -- you have the gift of poignant brevety. Excellent, Bhuwan!

Carmen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Yip that"s so true Bhuwan!!

No wonder I have cold hands and feet geeewiz!!

But a very warm heart.........just like you!!

:)))) < < <wink>>>>

Love Tinka

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Fantastic and profound piece.

Reviewed by Sophia Barkat (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Your poetry is like an epiphany.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

I love this piece in its simplicity of powerful meaning.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Powerful and no wonder I am chilled all the time{smiles}

Taylor

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

a very chilling thought but a true one, no doubt...

Reviewed by Sanjay Sonawani (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

wonderful poem Bhuwan. bringing forth brutal truth of the life!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Great insight my friend. Your words are focused out of the box. This is a great poem.
Love to you and your half of this world.
Susan

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

well that�s the tip of the iceburg, an interesting allusion

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Bhuwan...magnificent deduction!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Wow, is that why people feel so overwhelmed all the time... excellent Bhuwan!!!!!!!! stay strong my friend...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by ira eden

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Thought provoking, powerful write. I love poetry that provokes the reader to examine what they might not otherwise consider.

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eden

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

excellent..Floreann

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Precisely!...

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Bhuwan, this was simply AWESOME! The picture emphasizes the poem beautifully. An economy of words, but packing a powerful punch! Congrats on the promotional with QuietPoly.com. I share the space with you proudly. :)

Julie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2003

Profound thought!