Who is immortal?
He who live for others
Who is temperate?
He who is closer to the god
Who is the teacher?
He who spreads the message of love
Who is true ?
He who never deceives his heart
Who is wealthy?
He whose compassion knows no bounds
Who is serene?
He whose heart beats to the tune of love
Who is happy?
He who is free from covetousness
Who is blessed?
He who heals the cavernous ache
Who is courageous?
He who fights the war against adversity alone
Who is wise?
He who is not clever in his own eyes
Who is learned?
He who thinks he knows nothing at all
Who is free?
He who is not bonded to mortal constraints
Who is conscious?
He who feels the pain of others as his own
Who is religious?
He whose religion is love
Who is unconquerable?
He whose faith is unshakable as the mountain
I beg to disagree, Bhauwan: you ARE a superior poet. The questions are perfect, as are the answers: they are truth. By the way, thank you for your kind words about "I Society." You might want to read my most recent article "How Does God Measure Man's Success?"
I have many friends who are free within themselves enough to be eligible for your poem and have their friends say"Yes!" they are these. I am so proud of you for these words. In all my thoughts of my friends and all the times I tried so hard to convey how I feel for them your words have given my thoughts a voice here. You are my guru a man of full wisdom for our time.
Bless you for being my friend and friend to all others.
deeply meaningful poetry full of wisdom! Bhuwan you light up the den;-)!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Within individual hearts we all like to think of ourselves as thusly ordained. In reality we all fall far short of this you have spoken of. Good message for the ages.
I think this poem is about the truest I have ever read...well,it's up there at the top five that's for sure!
Have a beautiful day/night Sir,you are a gem indeed... your work enlightens and refreshes me.
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Bhuman: In your soul you possess a great deal of wisdom.
"Who is religious? He whose religion is love." If love was the basis of all religion, there would be few wars in the world. God IS love--I hope some day the world figures this out.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Utterly profound ....
You always make me think deeply......wonderful ty, Dani
I have written a chapter called I Am That, I Am in this inspirational compilation book by best-selling authors and wonderful people from all walks of life xox :-D (Its sister book is called Adventures In Manifesting - Success and Spirituality)
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Bonnie Q
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Reindeer
You really penned so many deep thoughts here!!
Love Tinka
Carmen
I have many friends who are free within themselves enough to be eligible for your poem and have their friends say"Yes!" they are these. I am so proud of you for these words. In all my thoughts of my friends and all the times I tried so hard to convey how I feel for them your words have given my thoughts a voice here. You are my guru a man of full wisdom for our time.
Bless you for being my friend and friend to all others.
Love and peace,
Susan ...this is the best Bhuwan.
Excellent, Bhuwan.
Best regards,
Leland
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Have a beautiful day/night Sir,you are a gem indeed... your work enlightens and refreshes me.
"Who is religious? He whose religion is love." If love was the basis of all religion, there would be few wars in the world. God IS love--I hope some day the world figures this out.
You always make me think deeply......wonderful ty, Dani