When War~~~~ (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2003

This title caught my eye while I was here. I'm glad.
What else is left to say about this poem?
Most excellant!

-C.S.

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuwan, VERY POWERFUL WRITE! Great use of words to convey a sad but true message. War Kills...PERIOD!
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed on November 29, 2003

im reminded of a line by robert graves 'the sky presses down in war'
terrible truth. some excellent vocabulary written very expressively carries the poem & it�s ideals, i don�t know what will happen when war finally ends for the human race, it�s not my future, now i just say no & walk away.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on November 29, 2003

Powerful and outstanding..Floreann

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 29, 2003

Powerful thoughts -- well developed and carried out.

Carmen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

The politicians need to read this...over and over...
Great, great, great, write!
Hope you had a pleasant Thanksgiving Bhuwan...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

I love the way you show both sides. Thank you, Bhuwan, for this offering. Respectfully, Regis.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Powerful write Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

There are poets who are so-so in creating canvases of word, some good, others quite good, still others with remarkable talent, yet others indeed great: but, there are a few who truly are magnificent-- both in the artistic craft as well as the precious messages they pen. I must, with clear conscience and in my most humble opinion, deem Bhuwan Thapaliya's work as magnificent.
Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C.
Associate Editor, Waltsan Publishing, Texas

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Excellent writing, and thoughts.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

You should read this at the white house and the UN.
SUPER JOB!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

War leaves wounds in the living long after it stops. Excellent write

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Bhuwan, you always leave the reader with hopefulness.... or maybe a wake-up write.... your heart of peace and love are always revealed, friend..... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Bhuwan....so well written...intense...and moving....one of your very best...bravo......floria

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Bhuwan: This is incredibly powerful and so true. You painted the portrait of the harsh reality of war, and then you went on to paint the beautiful picture of peace. Thank you so much for sharing this message of hope. I was extremely moved by it.
Susan

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

POWERFUL!!!!
Loved this write!

Love n Luck,
*Linda*

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Wonderful thoughts and poem, Bhuwan; as always. Enjoyed very much.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Powerful, profound write full of truth.

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Excellent Bhuwan. We can only hope that someday mankind will live up to his promise and let peace prevail. How can we sanction fighting for peace. I shall never understand this but I share the dream of one day letting mother earth fully enjoy her children.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

Wonderful work, my friend.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

War is all of that. Your words ring so true/ To not wage war when there are those who wish you harm and impose upon you no alternative if you want to continue to live as free people, is also futile, very much so.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

very powerful and well developed view on the futility of war ...

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

War is primitivism devoid of any purity, still sticking to inner being like the last glue to chaos. And peace would be growth and evolution... towards genesis. Utopian, but... why not believe Utopias can be possible? A powerful message, Bhuwan, beautifully written, as always from you.
Blessings,
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

lest we forget Bhuwan.....So well written.....Stark, moving yet with hope for the future......ty for sharing this, Dani