My life is landlocked (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Words like a sledge hammer. I stand and take notice of your poetic brilliance, my friend.

Michael

Reviewed by Sophia Barkat (Reader)

Reviewed on December 2, 2003

I'm a fan. :-)

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuman: This is excellent!! I spent several years working in nursing homes and have cared for many elderly people whose family doesn't even come to see them until they're on their death beds or in their casket. Sometimes the nurse's aides and nurses were the only family they really had. Thanks for sharing this.
Love, Susan

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuwan, you never disappoint me: another masterpiece so very well written with a most vital message therein. Hear ye, hear ye, one and all! ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuwan,

You are a powerful poet and so much of
yourself reflects in your poetry.

Taylor

Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

great message!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuwan, once again you show your beautiful spirit and wisdom in this compassionate poem. If we have no respect for the elders, then we have none for ourselves, for we are all humanity, regardless of age! Bless you !

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Excellent, Bhuwan. Much wisdom and forward looking here. This is an important subject about which you have written well.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bravo, Bhuwan...
I strongly believe in
that old saying,
"What goes around,
come around."

Great write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

So true my friend and written with wisdom.Each day as I wake up I wonder what will become of my grandkids, my son ,and all my nieces and nephews and I hope with all my heart their family takes care of them like mine has me.....

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

So much said in so few words.
Excellent.
Mor.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

This is so beutiful Bhuwan!!

Only a person with a goldenheart like could pen such a gem!!

Love You too sweet Young man!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuwan,

You have so much wisdome yes this is a jewel.
Your words are wise and it is in this wise instruction
many should learn these truths wonderul Dedication.
To the Elders of this world.

Love ~ Luck n Peace My friend
Peggy

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Oh Bhuwan...how you touched me with this....I just lost my mom this past summer...and when I would go visit her at the alzheimers care center....I saw all these abandoned elderly...reaching out for me...wanting me to be someone who came to see them....it is so sad how we treat our elderly....in China they are respected and held in high esteem as wise.....not old....thank you for this..it is a keeper..bless you.....floria

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

I'm one of those old ones, Bhuwan, so I know of what you speak. Some take you for granted as if you might live forever. Forgeting that
you may soon depart from them and then they might miss you. Excellent write

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Sage sage write, Bhuwan, and another example of how our modern world has lost another sacred ancient tradition - honoring the old ones.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

the ending is extrememly powerful in this very well written and real poem ...

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

How sad this is.
It is too easy to use the excuse I am busy
you are right perhaps we need to look ahead
to someone telling us they are too busy
Good one ..

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Love, and echo the sentiment, here, Bhuwan. Really loved this piece. You're a treasure.

Carmen

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuwan, GREAT write! I totally agree with you. Our Senior citizens are not loved and honored the way they should be. As Tami said...we all need to take heed.
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

This is a GEM of a write, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Bhuwan,

This is a powerful piece! Amen! (We all need to take heed.) Thanks so much for writing and sharing this one.

Hugs, Love, and Good Fortune...
Tami