When The Life Is Broken Apart ( Revised ) (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sophia Barkat (Reader)

Reviewed on December 10, 2003

Where is all this wisdom coming from?...LOL...wonderful work, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on December 10, 2003

Truly sings with inspiration and courage...LOVED IT!!
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed on December 9, 2003

i'm sure alot of people could benefit from these words
you should blow it upposter size with the picture and frame it
wonderful!!!!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 9, 2003

This was beautiful and so wise, beautiful Bhuwan,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2003

That every life has its struggle
Just like every path has its puddle

..alas I0m in a rather large puddle..I hope it stops raining in this heart of mine...
Beautiful write ..as always I leave your Den wiser and happier..ty dear friend!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2003

Bhuwan...I drank this in....like sweet nectar to my soul....fantastic writing that I really related to....clap clap for you on this one...fabulous writing...floria

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

A gem. And your last two lines hit the spot.

"That every life has its struggle
Just like every path has its puddle"

Thank you, Bhuwan.

Carmen

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

AN EXCELLENT WRITE ..MY FRIEND

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

good work!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

A beautiful, inspiring poem. Outstanding work as always
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

Truly excellent advice, Bhuwan, from one who always inspires!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

Great words of wisdom here Bhuwan...thank you for this wakeup call!!

I really, really needed to read this today!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

Wonderful advice
Broken hearts have a hard
time hearing ..

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Master Bhuwan, yet another superior write full of wisdom. "For past is nothing but history" and I add, "And tomorrow may not come. So live today and be your best at giving love to all." ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Bhuwan, this is dramatic and wise wordsmithing, powerfully written and honest! Yet for all its power and punch, it still has a tender heart! Superb write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Sage wisdom in this write. Great write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Bhuwan,

This is spoken with great Wisdom and so true

For it is the spirit that is awakend from sleep that will make the life worth it again and strong... You have written another excellent Jewel Bhuwan....
"When the life is broken apart
Don�t you sob and cry aloud
For ache is fed, not weakened
By your eternal drenched tears

When the life is broken apart
Don�t you visualize the past
For past is nothing but history
And along with time it flies

When the life is broken apart
Don�t you rupture your heart
But assemble all the courage
To start a new and jovial life

When the life is broken apart
Don�t you let your life slumber
Go and wake up your resting life
And flow fervently as the river Nile

When the life is broken apart
Don�t you loose hope and run
For failure is not its navigator
Nor an adversity its final destination

When the life is broken apart
Don�t you forget all but remember
That every life has its struggle
Just like every path has its puddle "

Love n Luck N Harmoney N Hugs

Peggy

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

This is outstanding, my friend! Wow, I needed to read you tonite.

Thank you!
Tami

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

the struggle makes it interesting ...

superb write poet!

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Another in a long line of brilliant works. Bravo.

Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Bhuwan always a pleasure to read many times, your work is so full of wisdom and inspiration!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Love the last lines..
Great advice here Bhuwan.....

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on December 6, 2003

Oh, Bhuwan, I remember this one, kept it... one of my favorites of yours.... where do you get such strength of wisdom... you are a spirited one.... thank you for sharing... stay strong, friend...
In Spirit,
Bear