Existence is insipid to my heart (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 29, 2004

Superb write Bhuwan

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

Peace and blessings Bhuwan is my wish for you. Striving for excellence is the greatest form of rebellion, reading your work makes me strive even more. Love Mikii

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

Outstanding write, Bhuwan. You've treaded into the inner sanctum of the soul...~Z~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

Glad to see you are safe, my friend.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Profound. Deep. Powerful. Inspired write.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

A wonderful write. Awesome imagery. Bhuwan, I've been so far behind in my reading - I didn't realize what was happening with you and your children. I'm so very glad that you and yours are safe and well.

A thousand hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Finest ever Bhuwan!!
Most excellent dear Bhuwan!!

Thank God you safe and back with us posting your most wonderful poetry!!

Warm Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Bhuwan, I think this is close to your finest! It is so impassioned and full of meaning. I've been keeping you,the children and your country in prayer. I'm so glad to see you post! Please take care, and know that your spirit will see you through, as He watches over you.

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

masterful ! bravo

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Very deep and insightful! Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Addie Williams Katie Fairchild

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Beautiful poem. So well expressed.

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Your words are always excellent,
both in their selection and in the messages.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Incredbible poem, one of your very best.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

So very beautiful, as usual you
touch with your visions. Bravo!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

existence comes when you believe you are part the whole

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

" I see nothing but the dolorous lamentations
of my naked dreams."
What a potent line, in a powerful set of verses!
May you and your family be safe and blessed.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

This was so softly beautiful and deeply touching, loved this Bhuwan,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

{{{BHUWAN}}}}

Yet you pen such wisdom and depth My poet friend.
"Forgive and forget me,
row your boat away
from the ocean of misery
before its voracious wave
consumes your ecstasy.

Autonomous is my spirit
look how the sky, is
enjoying its intercourse
with the sun,
I long to go there and heal my sore. "

Excellent poetry Bhuwan.....{{{So glad to see you back home.{{smiles}}
and the kids all safe.......m Lots Hugs and Love And luck.....
Lady Peg

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2004

Bhuwan I am so glad you are safe....I pray your children are...I was off the board for a few days but I read Pegs page about you....stay well...stay safe...this is excellent writing...the last verse simply blows me away...such original thoughts...bless you...floria