The old gray mare she ain't what she used to be......Patrick
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2010
Much to my lack of understanding, yet to my pleasure in labyrinths of literature. I am stunned by the cryptic and metaphorical expression. Ha ha! I did enjoy every word of this one, even without a good understanding of the meanings. Thanks for sharing, Dayvid.
this is really awesome Dayvid
I like so many of your phrasing here
especially the wrecking ball and thought!
What a wild ride here in thoughts & visuals
Unique equation, Dayvid...I love the illusion of rusted worn gears and like the radial arm saw, spiritual blades of sawtooth divinity butt up against the universal plan, a blueprint of a write...as a carpenter pastor of Menno who is refurbishing a house, this says it alot about your godly mindset...it takes patience to build a relationship with spirituality and an abode to keep us lit emotionally and spiritually in the universal divide...this is all worlds!
Love and eight-inch stair step depth cruising up the banister,
Sage
NO MATTER WHAT ONE DOES WITH 'LIGHT'...IT REIGNS. BEND IT, REMOLD IT, DIVIDE IT, WHATEVER...IT'S BRIGHTNESS IS NOT DIMINISHED. IT IS STILL...TRUE! THANKS FOR SHARING AND I LOVE THE PERFECT PICTURE THAT COMPLIMENTS SO WELL. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
-Dawn-
hug
Kathy
I like so many of your phrasing here
especially the wrecking ball and thought!
What a wild ride here in thoughts & visuals
Prismatic Spheres & Prisms Iridial Archways
Vickie
Love and eight-inch stair step depth cruising up the banister,
Sage