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We Cry Betrayed
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When you betray somebody else, you also betray yourself. Isaac Bashevis Singer

 

 

 

WE CRY BETRAYED

 

An oath is meant to represent

A pledge avowed in pure consent

When choice is made to honor word

One spoken truth.....by duo heard

 

Yet claiming oath, to heart alone

No other to....see efforts shown

Lost in the shadows of neglect

The oath to self.... dims in respect

 

No voice of other.......as a binder

No message, note, or quick reminder

And when we tread on darker shades

Upon our oaths..... we cry.........betrayed

 

 

hormonal poetry


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 Reviews of "We Cry Betrayed"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 3, 2004
Splendid poem Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
This is so true and powerful Lady A~
"Upon our oaths..... we cry.........betrayed"

Pax Lady p

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
So true, too many take oaths, with no intention of keeping them.

Indeed respect fly's out the window..

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
your poetry stirs our passions, thoughts and poetic credibiltites ...

Reviewed on April 30, 2004
Wow...Powerful and so true!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
Lady A...splendid poem, stirs the senses! kudo's!

Reviewed on April 30, 2004
Excellent

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
... hormonal poetry ? ...

LOL...so do you want a hormonal review?

Seriously now... this arrangement of words
is indeed sown from a heart of a poet. Your
words always bring a much needed dose of reality
into daylight. Fantastic writing GG.

Love, Dana xo

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
You always have the best quotes to accompany your fine writes.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 30, 2004
Lady, I like your poetry, it always touches somewhere inside of me. Either my heart, my mind or soul..this I must say touched all three. Very good write! Lisa

Reviewed on April 30, 2004
(((lady a)))

powerful, powerful write with profound lesson contained--thank you

outstanding imagery, verse and pic is haunting! they will stay with me a while

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(


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