CONCEIT( An Odd Attempt At Prose) (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

lol....right in the face
agree with Nordetta holds sooo true!!!
really enjoyed this wonderfulpic

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

A good write, Anita. Poetry is defined by rhythm/cadence/imagery. The fact that you did not rhyme does not turn your poem into prose. Your remain quite the elegant poet. BTW, the poem is so true. ;-)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

Dear Anita,

Well you sure said it, or should I say you certainly made a point, excellent Anita !!

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

Stunned...lol!!!
Saved this..

vesna:)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

Who else? Who else, I ask you, could surround such hilarity with such poetic beauty?

Being drawn into your words is absolutely voluntary, Anita... I come here and happily, willingly nestle inside your mind... what an adventure! You're amazing! katy xox.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

Fantastic work, as usual......loved every word Anita.....Great to read you!

Ty, Dani :)

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

Interesting write. I don't think a prick could pierce me because I'm dense when it comes to this one.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

LOL wtg Anita

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

Is this what is known as "cutting him down to size"? A thorny issue, done with great aplomb and skilfulness - you are good at pruning and I wouldn't want to get in the way of your shears!! But, alas, it befalls to us women to be the thorn in the side, perhaps... Great write, Anita - right to the heart of the matter! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 19, 2005

Lady A,

LOL--you're sharp, Lady--excellent!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I think I get the "point." Nicely done, Anita. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

good advice and we all know, at time's one must be a prick...or the gender equivalent and how the hell do you spell eqivalent anyway?

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

"If you must be a conceited prick, do it with pride ~ Unknown"
I doubt this is unknown or is that your middle name...LOL!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Loved it!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Muuuhaahaaa, Indeed!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Oh You...just as I got going you....Wham..it's over...silly you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

funny poetic conceit ... i think i need a band-aid ;) ...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Well a prick will always be a prick and there are thornless roses hehe.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

That smarts!! Good point!!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Very good, Anita!! I love this...hate those pricks. (laffin)
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Nonsense or not, I got the point. Ouch!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

When you do proee/free style, whatever you want to call it, I have noticed that you do not just make one long sentence and break it up. You do it the old-fashioned way. Right. This one is very good. I like to laugh, it made me do that.