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In Leaves Of Golden Crown
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In Leaves Of Golden Crown
 
A boy was born with curly hair
And a twinkle in his eye
A ready laugh and loving heart
That made the angels sigh
 
Quick of wit yet slow of pace
Born of a twisted limb
Exploring verdant hillsides
As nature sang to him
 
But he could only go so far
Before his body tired
Down the valleys he would limp
Yet struggled on the higher
 
There was a ridge of mystery
He dearly longed to climb
Resting by an ancient tree
And in it's shade he cried
 
If only I could fly above
Free as any bird
Alone he cried in solitude
And yet another....heard
 
He heard a crack, and eerie moan
And looked up towards the skies
While there to his amazement
A limb reached down from high
 
Wooden fingers beckoned him
To swiftly climb on board
On the rise towards paradise
Upward heaven towards
 
On a branch with golden leaves
He sat as on a throne
Padded by soft ivory clouds
Nested in this home
 
He saw the hills, he saw the sea
The ships, the fields and towns
A wooden limb.....and boy of skin
In leaves of golden crown
 
Pax
A
8/7/06

 

 


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 Reviews of "In Leaves Of Golden Crown"
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
A beautiful write, it made us yearn to reach for the boy and hug him, most wonderful done!
Love and Peace, B&R

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
A visually stunning and lyrically gorgeous write. Enjoyed the musical flow of emotion and narrative.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
This is inspiring and lovely.

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
This is beautiful. I saw a vision of the boy, the hillside, the tree clearly in my head as I read this wonderful piece of poetry. I'm so glad I dropped by...so glad you dropped by my site, too.

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
I felt as if I was on a hillside and had a vision reading this. Something is changing in you Anita.

Beautiful ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Dawnamerra Hayes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
This is such a beautiful piece. I felt transported to the hillside as a spectator of the magical moment between tree and boy. I found a metaphor for myself (not sure if intended by author or not:) of how nature can lift us up to dizzying hieghts and new vistas if we just let it. Lovely work!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
A truly marvelous offering, Queenie; and a poem that should delight both young and old.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
This is such a beautiful offering sis!!

Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
A very special poem that fills the heart with both joy and sadness. Joy in the grande finale! Splendid Anita!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
A lovely offering well-shared, Anita. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
You have the heart of this young lad cradlesd in your palms. You gave him flight...captured his dreams and made him a star. This is an awesome pen of the highest inspiration. I'm sending this to my son who coaches at a camp for kids with debillatating deseases. He will know just where it will do the most good. Thank you from my heart for a wonderful, insightful write. Bless you...totally!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
We are on the same vein tonight except you wrote pure poetry and it was a delight to read.

Reviewed on August 7, 2006
love this nice write! Mary

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
Anita

Absolutely glorious write of Celtic texture and dynamic spirituality..a potent concoction !

This is definitely a keeper for my library...

A lot of ancient wisdom enmeshed in this exceptional eclectic write

And love that dreamy graphic..

Your Den is always full of nice surprises..

Love and Peace

Peter


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