older and wiser........maybe? (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

Great poem

Edwin

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

There's always that famous question...do you believe in fate. I do, but I also believe our choices alter fate. This poem reminds me of the Domino effect that our choices make. Great write:) Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

all of fate stems on those decisions--- which leads me to believe that fate must not exist-- or does it? --Charlie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 12, 2009

decisions, decisions... however long we got, there are too many options... which increase the more we linger... Older means bolder, I reckon! Perfect and effortless rhythm and rhyme as always. xx

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 12, 2009

You are right, a choice every moment. Now that is a sobering thought and a fine poem A.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

If you pushed a little harder with those legs in the picture, you might make that somersault...;-) Ed

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

I think we all have some things in our we would change if we could butt that is human, the thing is to accept where we are today.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Excellent choice of topic,brilliant poem!
I too pondor the choices, and wonder if we
really would do it differently, if we could.

Eileen

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

We do make our lives as we see fit. Everyone can try a little harder to be a better person, but some are so depressed and downhearted they don't even try. Those I try to stay away from. Your write is uplifting and good advice too.

Reviewed by Ingeborg von Finsterwalde (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Well done, really great poem. The ancient philosopher Horace said it best: "Adversity has the effect of eliciting talents which, in prosperous circumstances, would have lain dormant. So we keep right on going...

Ingeborg

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Lovely Write... I like it. With every sunrise is a new beginning in forward motion. Live it wisely, TAKING an advantage is not necessary. This is only my perspective. Warmth and Love to you. Carin' Spirit

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Indeed, Lady A, life is what you make it. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.