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Paradise Exhales
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Paradise Exhales
 
 
The sun retires, dripping color from the skies
Upon the realm,of dusk and dawn allied
In a continuence of bloom upon the air 
The breath of paradise exhales, as heaven's prayer
 
Pax
A
June 23,2009
 
 
Another painting attempt for me

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Paradise Exhales"
Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 26, 2009
This is so beautiful, Anita and the painting as well. If the painting on your latest offering "Kimono" is yours, Kudos!!! It too is stunning. I prefer acrylics to oils because of the drying factor that you mentioned in Paws and Bristles. Oil is, however, a bit more forgiving as you can cover darned near anything if you choose to. I think acrylic suits me best because I like to keep the flow of my idea going or else I lose my mental image of what I wanted to achieve. I am sooooooooo into immediate gratification and sooooo short of memory.LOL!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jo Pelletier (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
You have penned how beautiful God's works of art leave me breathless...ooh-ing and ah-ing. Great poem, Anita. I also liked your painting...is it titled with the same name?

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Yet another perfect utterance from your blushing, brushing pen. Your art, as ever, complements and becomes you. Your artistic expression seems boundless and you have forged a most wonderful and fruitful partnership with your gifts and talents. Rock on! :)) xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
I tend to think of it as the flower, exhaling its lovely scent to attract the insect to carry out its reproductory obligation.

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
beautiful imagery!

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
BEAUTIFUL...YOUR IMAGERY IS BREATHTAKING. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
...dusk and dawn allied. Indeed, a breath of paradise, Pax.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 2, 2009
Just Awesome! I love it!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
Truly lovely verses complemented perfectly by the image that you have chosen. Thank you for sharing this gift, Anita. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
Anita this capture such emotion and passion...wonderful image.

hug
Fee

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
A beautiful picture and write. I especially like that last line. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
you have penned a canvas filled with complex color -- written an inspiring song -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
Magnifcent and beautiful poem,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
Quite captivating, Queenie, as is your painting.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Beautiful.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Art and poem are an enchanting combo, Apax!
Beautifully done, thanks for sharing...ET

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Beautiful artwork as well as your penning.
Lovely and quite enjoyable.

All the best to you,
Gwendolyn


Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
This breathes beauty, Anita. Wonderful images and meaning. Love this time of day. Adore your use of color and the peacocks--one of my favorite birds! Saving this one...

Lin

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 30, 2009
Pax,
Perfect in its mood and feeling.
John


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