Reverent Cut (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

....And we keep on walking with our heads held high .... FOR ALL of the woman we are. Love your creativity. Sadness is dwelled upon so beautifully.

Thank you,

Teresa

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

"Now I walk as a cripple, tradition as my crutch
Losing sense of self respect, numb and out of touch "
Powerful write!!!

Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Very nice write. Been cut a couple of times by those binds myself. Luckily the poetry survives.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Excellent write with power and depth!

~Joseph

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Oh Yes, this is outstanding. A brilliant look at the pitfalls of tradition.

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Anita,I am trying to believe my eyes; when I do, I'll comment..?

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Lady A. Awesome poetry. Love the rhyme and flow.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

10/10....write of the day....simply great....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

dont be so harsh on yourself....cant we have both?, why not.
stunning poem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Great write!!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

me either, so serious

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Traditions connect us to our past. They remind us of what our ancestors went through. Their endurance has allowed our survival. What you have done is taken the past and correctly applied it to your future. It is something to know, but not necessarily to live by.

This is an incredible poem. It is extremely well-written and expresses a great deal. At least to me.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Great write.

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Many of us cant shake tradition..Well conveyed .. Well don!!!

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

fantastic i loved it
steve

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

outstanding write, anita! (((HUGS))) :(