I am the source of me
My origin and my seed
I am my root, I am my dawn
The spring from which my spirit's drawn
I am the well, to quench my thirst
My thoughts first virgin, then rehearsed
I am the author of my fate
Existence is .....as I create
I am that first word, on my page
Embrace my creed...believe I'm sage
I am the cause of who I am
i like the last line particularly..i think it invokes the incessant need for change that we must all go through in life...without the crack in the dam, we would remain the same...and with life ever-changing, how good would that be? nice write, poet.
An interesting write that strikes a nerve, as poetry should.
good work Lady A
peace
Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
In the beginning there was the word...and the word is 'I AM'. I loved this beautifully written spiritual poem. We are the co-creators of our lives and you say it in such an outstanding way. Thanks for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Libby
Tremendously well written, Anita; though I disagree as to source, for I believe God is the source of all things and all people: all predestined. ~~Bonnie Q
You "am" a Wonderful poet too!!! Love reading you Lady A.
Jack
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
A quiet ROAR! I couldn't help myself.. I plunged into this 3 times.. beautifully composed, but more than that, it exudes the kind of positive attitude that just glistens! I MUST have this in my library.. a poem for the ages! katy.
Anita, this is stunning. You are also the source of an immense talent. I'm sorry I haven't been reading you more often. That is going to have to change as you are really gooood.
Sexuality is very misunderstood.What if the tornado dropped Dorothy not into Oz, but onto the shooting set of an X-rated film?
Eric Edwards makes sex films. Period... Sex-on-command. Sex-for-hire.... So begins the story of Eric Edwards, Mr.
This book has been eight years in the making. It is mostly a jumble of thoughts written down in old spiral notebooks and hidden in the bottom drawer underneath various manuals for software packages and hardware long since turned obsolete.
~Chrissie
good work Lady A
peace
Many Blessings,
Libby
Reindeer
Jack
Love Tinka
Steve
~ Sara