Done My Time (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 6, 2005

Excellent!

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

This poem flows from a fountain of deep thoughts to
the lake of sublimity. "Done My Time" is an inspiring
poetic excellence.

I salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2005

Girl...this is so beautifully compact and yet pregnant with meaning.
You are really, really Goooood!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Wise message. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Damaa --

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Very nice, Mizzlady!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

A marvelous poem, Mizzlady - and that is a wonderful quote.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Depends on where you did your time, if it worked for you, then your future will change for the better...if your life is your time, then I think you seem to be doing just fine...if this poem is any example...Ed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

our souls are imprisoned only as long as we allow them to be ...

(ever read Watt's, "the Wisdom of In-Security"?)

deep and inspired poem ...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Girl, this is good. It's sooooo good. I get so tired of people saying, Oooh, don't talk to me if you got drama. Well, sugars if you don't have drama, you've flat-lined. You're dead. Life is drama. It's how you handle it that makes the difference. Simplicity is in the mind. Master it! Great write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Excellent Z~ we all come to our time when we understand the things that have brought us to it.I think life is lived on levels of understanding, and how long it takes us to reach each level is up to how much we put in to learning about ourselves. Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Yes this one has a lot of depth and insight and brings out some truths as well.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Indepth and thoughtful write about our life here on this old planet. I believe that we do take ourselves a bit too seriously for the most part. It has taken me quite a few years to understand that and the fact that people can actually get along if they pnly put their minds to it and forgive themselves for the thoughts that they have which hinder that "getting-along." You really took this poem to another level. Good.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Gotta let them ole shackles go go go, and move on on on, and have fun fun fun..

Great determined write..

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Intense. When we're ready, our time is done... a new journey begun...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Most powerful piece Zenith!!

Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Mizzlady,

A strong, affirming write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

That pic is kewl!