Retribution (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

I imagine that in a meeting between Minerva, Erato, Phoebus
and Euterpe to discuss how to search for a Poet on Earth, they
- UNISON - would just say, after reading "Retribution", "EUREKA!"

"Retribution" is sample of what is Poetry's compliance.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi

Reviewed on March 16, 2005

Excellent as always.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 12, 2005

Truthful and sound wisdom offered through your verses here. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

Careless opinons the most deadly hurtful weapon there is. Perfect
Thank You
Tracey

Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

A harsh poem here and well executed. I am impressed by this one -- glad you enjoyed "Desolated Oblivian." You should turn this one into a full length short story.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

wise words
well crafted!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Right on the mark, Z~! perfect! I believe in Karma!;-)

love,
eileen

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

I'm awed by your rhythum in this excellent piece. Bravo!!!!!!Mikii

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

wow...this is really good...exceptional flow and structure...and ya gotta love those wicked lips...splendid job, Mizz

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Poetically powerful.

Wicked lips are a dangerous weapon in my book.

Take care

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Mizzlady,

Exceptionally versed, imaged, and poetically written - wonderful work!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Destruction is eminent
by twisted options
when careless opinions
sprout from wicked lips...

Most profound, Mizzlady.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

So very true. Excellently expressed.

Be quick to listen, slow to reply..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 6, 2005

when careless opinions
sprout from wicked lips ..

powerful poetry ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2005

Spoken and written extremely well!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 6, 2005

Mizzlady,

One reaps what one sews. Words spoken in haste come up to bite you in the rear. :) I learned that a loooooooooooooong time ago.

Thank you for the wisdom in this powerful, thought provoking piece--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

You will be missed. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 6, 2005

Read with sorrow your note regards leaving us for a time...but hope you will stop by and say hello, but if you cannot just think of us all and smile as you do, as we will quite frequently for you...Take care & find Peace Mz. ~Z~...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 6, 2005

Powerful posting Zenith!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 6, 2005

You remain a wise and profound woman, Z. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 6, 2005

How true your poem is. Great message to be heeded.