AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Myra Darwish, iJohn Burns, iT. Weber, iKalikiano Kalei, i RickthePoetWarrior, iAlvin Romer, iDavid Clure, iGracie McKeever, iJill Eisnaugle, iMatt Miller, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 297 Titles
· 2,508 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: May, 2003

Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Blind Drawing
by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations → (All Poetry by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations)
   Not rated by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Inspired by an excelent poem titled "Poem for Nothing" by one of the authors of the writing group "Escritas" (based in Portugal, and formed by writers of all countries where Portuguese is the official language). This poem is a translation, but, like the original, it demonstrates that no poem is ever "for nothing", as most poems have the attribute of inducing, in other spirits, the lines of other poems.
As for the art, it is titled "Study of a Lost Drawing" and is by renowned surrealist Cruzeiro Seixas.


Poem Artwork

Blind Drawing


 


It is of wind, today, the drawing on the sand.


Neither do I see it, nor am I wrapped in what it brings
to the verge of this salt that the lips close
or to the hair untied in a dance, oblivious
to whispers traced by the sea.


Robes of a linen much too fine
and strands of pearls that the breasts roll
yet do not warm, sing of cold
and rip
tenderheartedness in tiny ribbons
of colours fainter than the air
to then pervade the fluid nacre
in brief sobs that are also the laughter
of a scent that was balmy
when dream, yesterday, swept the dune
of granules percolated by some star.


I don’t even know to where my fingers run
if I’m not going anywhere within these lines
that the wind makes sinuous, in the manner of a form
nude, reclined and forgotten of itself
in antithesis of that impulse throbbing
a pliable essence, yet
never docile, in the passions or clefts
of flooding tide which, so often, it carved.


So, I stop, between the deliberate blindness and the drawing
that the wind, in a dash, unveils in my body
to promptly veil it, with the help of the sand
in the eloquent soul and in the foam
of another vision.


 


© 2005 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*® Authors & Creations


 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Blind Drawing"
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
There is a moment in all artsistic creation
when we close our eyes and create, uninhibited,
from the heart. In this way, our own creation
becomes a gift to those who are open to receiving it.
And whenever one heart touches another in this way,
a seed is planted and, if nourished, it will give
birth to another creation.

You are this kind of Artist, meu Amor, whose blindness
is really a seeing with the heart, giving perfect vision.
That's why your creations are gifts of light to others,
blinding to some, at first, but then birthing new visions
in other hearts, again and again.

Amo te minha Artista,
Joseph

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
Another outstanding poem Alexandra! You enchant all the senses with this gem! Beautifully written!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
Awell woven poem on the sands of time.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
extremely well written, captivating poem ... luv the finale ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
Awesome write and as always stretching outside the box to find the perfect word images to offer up to your readers.Well done Alexandra.

Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
A most captivating poem and artwork, Alexandra.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
A masterpiece.

Lisa


New Poetry by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

My Treasure Trove of Poems. by Sophie Boswell

This is a collection of poems - many with photos - composed over a ten year period of my life.  
Member BookAds

My Treasure Trove of Poems. by Sophie Boswell

This is a collection of poems - many with photos - composed over a ten year period of my life.  
Member BookAds

Poetry Pages: A Collection of Voices From Around the World by Erin Kelly-Moen

A Collection of Voices from Around the World is more than just a poetry compilation. It is a partnership of poets from around the globe brought together by an internet poetry forum. That forum, poetrypages.com, has been the home of many a fine poet s  
Member BookAds