rhymed poetry is not my speciality, particularly in a language which is not my original one... but Joseph's new poetic form represents such an irresistible challenge! so, here's my humble attempt at "tres linhas" - it may not be very good, but it sure was fun to write! :0)
"Tres Linhas" - three lines that must rhyme in syllables of 5, 6 & 7, respectively. Should also contain imagery that celebrates some sort of connection between nature and spirit.
linhas de amor (love lines) – “tres linhas” form
love written in strands of fate crossing our hands ~ lines not to fade ‘pon time’s sands.
Please accept my deepest gratitude for this wonderful offering to the new form of poetry I birthed called Tres Linhas. Knowing that your creation was achieved by such high effort makes your gift all that more prescious to me.
In love of you and your ever-expanding talent,
Joseph
Well I would say you have done a marvelous job of "tres linhas" and one you should be quite proud of as well as the graphic matches the mood of the lines so well. Great work.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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Please accept my deepest gratitude for this wonderful offering to the new form of poetry I birthed called Tres Linhas. Knowing that your creation was achieved by such high effort makes your gift all that more prescious to me.
In love of you and your ever-expanding talent,
Joseph
Beautiful.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love & Light, Jo
Regis
Felix
eT
The whole world loves a trier !
And you have risen to Joseph's Challenge with aplomb and style
Love and Harmony
Peter