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Marshmellow Foam
by Vivian L Dawson → (All Poetry by Vivian L Dawson)
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Thundering waves, voice of the beach.
Our domain...sparkling is the white sand,
a blanket of evolution for our comfort.

Pause with me, be not troubled, command
the powers, deliver your strife upon breaking
waves...take away only tranquility.

Take my hand, sailing we will go,
revisiting the depth, dampened clothes,
sea salt lips...goodbye waves...cliffs from
home...children of La Jolla evermore to be.

(c)copyright21November2010vivianldawson

 

 


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 Reviews of "Marshmellow Foam"
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2011
That's a real reverie Vivian. Thanks for the memory. Cliffs from home. This sums up an adventure of ours. I'll always remember it. Your words make it all the sweeter.

Reviewed by Ron Michael (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
I know nothing at all about La Jolla but from the picture I'm looking at I'm sure the poem is correctly titled. From the way the children are watching the "Marshmellow Foam" you would think they were watching real marshmellows bubbling up as they were being roasted.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2011
Excellent writing sweet lady....stay safe and well always my sweet friend...Hugsss

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
VIVIAN, ANOTHER WONDERFUL WRITE. I CAN SEE AND FEEL THE VIEW ...ANNA

Reviewed on May 21, 2011
mellow indeed, great picture. Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Observing what's there, Vivian,
but seeing far beyond it.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
A sumptuous, elegant write!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Like any oceanic beach I've visited, looks like a nice place...e

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
A Wonderful write indeed Laura

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Yep. I've taken in La Jolla in my day. Nice is the word.

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
La Jolla! One of my very favorite places. Thundering waves hitting against the large rocks. Tranquility and peacefullness... you described it so well, Vivian. A wonderful, nostaglic read. Joy Hale

Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Thanks.


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