~Waking~
Contiguous your wings
when soul wants to soar
evil winds suround you
not to despair
daisy petals at your feet
~of the Wind~
Empowering the beginning
enlisting the billowing clouds
ending in winsome days
~Waking of the Wind~
Dissipating evil's darkness
calmness blows in
kaliedescoping your aura
perpetually in oneness for unity
of mind aligned with matter
(c) Waking of the Wind's Oneness 01July2011 Vivian L. Dawson
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Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2011
BEAUTIFUL WORK AGAIN VIVIAN THE WIND EMBRACES US IT IS A FEELING OF FREEDOM AS WE KEEP WALKING. ANNA
An imaginative last verse; convention teaches us "mind over matter" but why not mind aligned with matter? The idea of a psychedelic aura is pretty attrective too.
A little bit of Peter Pan in this enchanting poem of dark and evil,overcome by calmness blowing in to overcome the evil darkness. Written by the clever pen of Miss Vivian. Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2011
This ia a great poem. It says in a few words what the movie "Mindwalk" is about. I especially like "kaliedescoping your aura".
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
John
Blessings,
Christine