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Puzzled am I...with Pieces
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~Puzzled am I...with Pieces~

A canvas with challenging
puzzle pieces placed to
shape and form a life after
each piece fits

~Life ensues in this perplexity~

Some will find a place right
away, some will keep trying

with hope to fit in

Retain the ones you have
tried for another day of
reassessment, perhaps

Implore the ones in place
to help you vision a mate
to snuggle in
 

How long to fill the empty
places with all the pieces

in perfect array?

Who will become that
very piece that completes
when applied...to solve
the
fulfillment and be
the conclusive solution 
to this riddle

~Puzzled no more~

(c) Puzzled am I...with Pieces
12July2011
Vivian L. Dawson

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Puzzled am I...with Pieces"
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
LIFE IS A JOURNEY...SOMETIMES MISSING PUZZLE PIECES COME TOGETHER WHEN WE LEAST EXPECT IT.
ANOTHER WONDERFUL PIECE OF WORK, ANNA

Reviewed by Linda Whitted (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
Well written poem that stimulates and encourages one's own inner thoughts and memories to "connecting that final piece of the puzzle." Great writing. Thanks for sharing. Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 13, 2011
Life can truly be a puzzle, and it's wonderful when we find some missing pieces.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2011
beautiful indeed... How long...the life's puzzle gonna go, i wonder at times. This write is very beautiful and well written :)neerja

Reviewed on July 12, 2011
very creative. enjoyed! Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 12, 2011
i like the point of view, Vivian,
and the thought-through motif.

John

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on July 12, 2011
Wonderfully written poetry indeed Laura

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2011
This is quite an original poem, jigsaw puzzles are a good metaphor for life and like you we all spend our lives trying to make the pieces fit.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2011
I'm the world's worst at riddles, and puzzles. I like your title and you seem to have all the pieces, just maybe not the order they are supposed to fit. Nice write.


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