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Sweetly Bitter ed the Coming Home
by Vivian L Dawson → (All Poetry by Vivian L Dawson)
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Blue moons without the warmth
of love brings chills, so I was left
to keep the home fires going with
our marshmallow dreams

Vines  now grown  over that  lovers
lane night since you said wait for me

I still visualize your youthful face
but,  wear  my  hair  differently
not  looking  quite  the  same
that  pony  tail  long  gone

While you were back packing
indulging in a carefree world
I  was  to  find  my  way
graced with poetic words

A box full of picture postcards
on  a chilly winter's night  not
enough..left me with an option of
moving on to a warmer embrace

Now we find ourselves in a home
coming, what will you do to embellish
the years way overdue in front of our
families and friends

Will the fire sparkle and flame..or die
out in the ashes shoveled up and
thrown out in the trash of the day

Yet to be determined when you walk
back into lives...so bitter sweet is the
coming home

(c) Sweetly Bitter ed the Coming Home
09October2011
Vivian L. Dawson

 


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 Reviews of "Sweetly Bitter ed the Coming Home"
Reviewed by Joem Webster (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2011
I have always loved the warm way you have of writing your poems. It brings back many memories for me. Love, Joem

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
You know how to beautifully explore and convey insights of the heart, Vivian!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
GREAT WORK. ONE CONTEMPLATING HOW IT WILL BE WHEN 'YESTERDAY' AND 'TODAY'...COME HOME. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2011
This has a strong narrative and the imagery is vivid.
"Vines now grown over that lovers,lane night since you said wait for me". So well written. The passage of time is artfully alluded to with the pony tail reference and of course the box of postcards.
The reader is carried along hoping for a satisfactory conclusion.
This is good work.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 10, 2011
Each word expresses deeply the emotions that one lived and carried within...your poem is heartfelt, but oh so beautiful~
Christine~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 10, 2011
Bittersweet indeed, as love often is.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 10, 2011
WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 9, 2011
Here the heart is nervous, wary and expectant,
the real mix of feeling the poet doesn't dodge
or gloss over - such truth and honesty, Vivian, are admirable
and touch this reader deeply.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 9, 2011
Very well done indeed Vivian...you captured your subject so well.
fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 9, 2011
A beaut of a write, yet one can feel the terror and apprehension of what one knows as a maybe, due to fore warning.

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on October 9, 2011
A bitter homecoming? Will he be as you remembered; will he surprise you when he takes you in his arms and speaks of love once again? Or will be be hesitant waiting for you to make the first move? Our minds are wondering for you present this poem so well!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on October 9, 2011
A heartfelt poem written deeply from the heart with much emotion well done poetry as always Laura

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2011
Ah, the prodigal scoundrel is coming home. Will he still have the same old charm, or will it fall flat as a badly made pancake . . . The rest is yet to be told . . .


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