Ms. Vivian, this poem has a very magical feel to it. I can almost feel their energy...Makes me want to have this same kind of connection with someone special...One day it will arrive in my Universe..
As days are numbered
garner your faith with hope
an ethereal Beyond awaits
Such meaningful words, Vivian. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2011
This is quite poignant, the theme of love eternal has been well explored by the greats but you have found a fresh angle here. You have crafted two stand out lines; "inhaling possibilities,exhaling love everlasting"
As I read your poem aloud... I whispered the words to an empty room. Ah, but was it empty or were there angels about me also whispering? An absolutely lovely poem, well penned from your quill of excellence.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful heart.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
:) Janna
garner your faith with hope
an ethereal Beyond awaits
Such meaningful words, Vivian. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Blessings,
Joy L. Hale