Peak-a-Boo (poem) by Vivian L Dawson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2012

at long last a true palimpselestial semi-stream-of-consciousness sizzle-me-timbers to a crispy creature-comfortably strumming in a minor chord of would you believe it's not butter-me-up and down until I'm ready to roast on an open fire on all cylinders until the synapses come home to roost and the chickens have all hatched schemes "in a spirit of mind togetherness"ting in a cozy cuddle... oh and by the way, I liked it, I really liked it... :)

Roger

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 24, 2012

This is absolutely stunning poetry...one of your very finest as of late...I love it..

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 24, 2012

our planet of inhabitants with
plains of beasts co existing
in spirit of mind togetherness

Would that it were so, Lady Vivian. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Dominguez

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

Good day Dear Lady Vivian. Lovely and so refreshing are the words which where used to describe the co-existing of man and earth. Very well chosen and very well penned my Dear Lady Vivian. God Bless and have a lovely weekend. George AKA THE WISE OLD OWL from Classmates.

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

Are you a closet Eco Warrior, Vivian? Not a fashionable stance these days what with the power of the polluters. Harmony and togetherness are great ambitions for all of us and for our planet.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

poem and picture so unique and interesting. Thansk, ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

Can we... My optimism was low this morning but after reading Peek-a-Boo I'm back on the horse that threw me. Thanks Vivian.
:) Janna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 23, 2012

So many no longer seem to care about 'co-existing' with our planet's many other wondrous life forms, and that is extremely sad. I hope many will soon begin 'to see.'

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on February 22, 2012

A spiritual togetherness gazing worthy ~ tremendous thoughts
entailed~ Lady Vivian Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on February 22, 2012

Fascinating poetry indeed Laura

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on February 22, 2012

I think you just about covered everything that is pertinent, Vivian.

"Ride a horse among tall buildings
feel the wonderment of both
their graceful balance taking place
reprieving state of confining saddle"

This did it for me. Beautiful imagery here.