Garlands of heart imagine
me upon the beach looming
silence of tattered and torn
from my young life scorned
Message is casting this anguish
far away with dolphins at play
just as surely as a new horizon
of infallible mind indulgence for
antidotes of empowerment
Setting aloft the wind of this
ancestral space which caresses
my angered face poised to be
whispers of inner sanctum
F ears to face...
R esurgence to become...
E xpeditiously and
E ternally free to be
(c) Message for a Bottle
07April2012
Vivian L Dawson
There must be fifty ways to leave your lover.......or nemesis. I think your bottle came back to you. Patrick
Reviewed by Cindy Schaffer (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2012
Beautifully Written, As You Always Do. Love, Peace, Joy, Happiness, Lots Of Laughter, And Most Of All, ~ God's Blessings, To Shower You And ALL Your Family,
Always a dream-like situation to be the receiver of such a message and respond in kind. Beautiful sentiments expressed.
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2012
If only it were that easy to cast away our troubles. I'm sure most folks like the idea of a message in a bottle, the infinite possibilities that come with the act offset by the remote chance that anyone will find the message. You have handled this theme really well, it makes a good read.
A fine "message" well-shared, Vivian; also I love the imagery as well as the lovely image that you have chosen to represent your theme. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
'Message for a Bottle' Just stuffing it in there is a good relief at times to take off some weight of the mind..this is deep and emotional. I can see those dolphins playing~
Love this self-introspection, whether for real or made up make not one whit of difference, Vivian. It is the grit within the lines that lend hope and eventual salvation to this lonely person. You struck a good chord with me here.
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Today And Everyday, ~~~~~
Cindy E. H. Schaffer :)
Onward, away with darkness. I identify with and admire this poem!
Blessings,
Christine
A wonderful poem Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann
Ron
Regis
yearning imagining moving beyond
earth boundaries
we all have to sail somewhere to
be us
an excellent poem, Vivian
john
A wonderful piece.
Budd