Incarnation so intense
inciting the senses
my body a vase
heart above the thorns
my love for you
evermore
I your Vivienne
essence of prelude
Muse of continuum
without end
(c) Prelude
19April2012
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviews of "Prelude"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2012
Good job! Poignant phrasing and clear message of true affection.
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2012
beautifulll....loved it.. best wishes Vivian, neerja :)
A true work of art..
Diana...
Lady Mary Ann
simply perfect
john
heart above the thorns
I love these lines.
:) Janna
Ah yes indeed, Vivian. You have placed heart above the thorns in such a wonderful and loving love poem. Beautifully, heartfelt, done.