Butterfly channels lantern of light
cherry pink my love watching over
you in voyage of discovery for
oneself obtaining loving attributes
overcoming fearful vulnerabilities
in the blackest fathoms of any sea
I will coax the sun to shine on
your sails in gentle breezes with resilience to never look back on
storms that have past as the
rainbow lies ahead to seek
I am Your Guardian Angel from
birth to be with You every rise
and retreat of the tides with
magnetic guidance of the moon
to cycle an end only to begin again
(c) Aura Borne the Sentinel
24April2012
Vivian L Dawson
This reads as a rather beautiful allegory, with the Guardian Angel symbolising a lover willing sunshine and gentle breezes on the object of their affections in his/her voyage through life. The language and the pace of this uniquely feminine piece gives it a peaceful loving atmosphere.
sometimes a guardian angel is really your oversoul guiding us and looking over you ... it is also your creative self which has eloquently guided you through this wonderful poem ...
My goodness, you got me from the first word to the last, truly moving in beauty and spirit...and yes we do have Guardian Angel's~
Christine
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
I very much like your pairing of words: "Butterfly channels", "cherry pink" , "blackets fathoms", "magnetic guidance". Bewitching, but delicate and strong at the same time. Good poetry. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
Wonderful words watching over me
a Guardian Angel to allay my fears
sailing through life on a mighty sea
to calm the waters wash away my tears
Wonderful Goddess of Love here, Vivian, to watch over the voyage of discovery, which we all know, is perilous and frightening. A Guardian Angel, indeed, is a Goddess of Love.
Christine
a Guardian Angel to allay my fears
sailing through life on a mighty sea
to calm the waters wash away my tears
I feel better already.
:) Janna
the sense of security, the blanket..fine spirituality
in this work, Vivian, it entices me to trust
john
Beautifully captivating in verse and image Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann
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