Rain, rain, rain wetting our
sexual intentions tracing
our bodies like fingers in
the sweet summer liquidity
with plummets of thunder
engaging our every move
Complimenting fire of
desires lightening has
already ignited eminent
in steamed heat rising
of our emotional intimate
intense pursuit of passion
satisfying our every need
Let it rain...May it pour
a storm for many to have
such exhilarating desires
carried out in the flesh
(c) Liquid Gold for Desires
06June2012
Vivian L Dawson
Sweet summer liquid gold for desires sensous and exhilaratng.
Lady Vivian your verses pulsate ravishingly in thunderstorms of passion.
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2012
...exhilarating as the long, hard reign of sensuality may be, dear Vivian, your poem goes the distance when it comes to revivifying the passions that come when a downpour really pours it on! Way to drench us and stir us with your steamy deluge.
I have visions of steam rising and evaporating into the storm..of rain or emotion? Excellent, good tone and movement, strength of passion. Be well, Kathy
The picture combined with your sensual word painting would make aAnyone want to experience making love in a summer rainstorm...wonderful poetry indeed.
fee
You are becoming exceptional in the art of giving us the fires of sexuality these days, Vivian. The photo is perfect for the verse and the verse is mesmerizing and sizzling. You don't leave us much for our imagination. Good writing, my friend.
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Lady Vivian your verses pulsate ravishingly in thunderstorms of passion.
Lady Mary Ann
Regis
words ideas and images are continuous and unbroken
throughout..matching the energy of the theme
john
Nicely done!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Is it hot in here or what...hooo rah
Budd
fee