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Yet to be Determined
by Vivian L Dawson → (All Poetry by Vivian L Dawson)
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Seeing but not feeling
ghostly and chilly am I
for you have beckoned
me but I am not ready

Likened to an iceberg
what is on the surface
does not denote what is
underneath

True love revealed
solely in the timing

melting ice when two
hearts emit the warmth

(c) Yet to be Determined
24June2012
Vivian L Dawson

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Janna Hill
Reviewed on June 28, 2012
... but I am not ready.
I like that Vivian.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2012
Vivian, "melting ice when two hearts emit the warmth" makes you feel fuzzy all over...beautiful words!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2012
another GREAT ONE, KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL HG

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2012
Wouldn't we all like to know what is under the surface, it would save a lot of time messing with the small stuff. This is nicely constructed and certainly gets across the "Ice Maiden" theme.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 26, 2012
Numbness..in time indeed, to thaw and process..heartfelt words~
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 26, 2012
Intiguing write that says a lot but also leaves a lot for the reader to contemplate...well done.
fee

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on June 26, 2012
Enchanting this beauty in poetic reveal Lady Vivian.
Excellent writing.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on June 26, 2012
A great write as always and so meaningful Laura

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 25, 2012
One of your best, Vivian. Feeling under the weather or would comment more.


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