One Green Leaf (poem) by Vivian L Dawson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2012

Some nice poetic touches in this, clear word pictures, neat narrative, alliteration etc. I liked that leaf of faith pun best of all.

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on August 15, 2012

Everlasting expressions are those that created movement of emotions from within, and changed all whom you touched. As the brown leaves flutter to the ground, come spring the season of birth, the tree will be stronger, and one star in the heavens,
will shine brighter.

dan

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2012

VIVIAN, ANOTHER BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN PIECE OF WORK WORDS EXPRESSING LIFES PASSAGE...KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORDS..LOVE ANNA

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

Symbolically meaningful; a lovely presentation, Vivian. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

BEAUTIFUL STORYIN POEM OF MY LIFE. NEXT IS WINTER, TREES ARE GREY SKIES ARE GRAY SHRUBS AREV DORMAT, LONELY TIMES FOR ME,SOON IT,LL BE TIME TO GO BEYOND....DONE VERY WELL VIV,.... HG

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

So Beautifully written my friend Laura

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

In a leafy motif her words
smile across eons of time
green with life's gust,
ripe with a luster of riches,
rare as a zephyr in winter
from "beyond the clouds"...

Love that last image,
but only slightly more than the rest...
Wonderful poem, dear Vivian.

Roger

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on July 16, 2012

Lovely pictures of life darlin' done very nicely... Of course Autumn is my favorite time of year, I think most have this their favorite. Fun time to think back of all that has happened in life and nothing wrong with growing along :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on July 16, 2012

i think we all reflect on when we were green and young as our color changes..brown aint too bad either. like the poem vivian very well penned.
budd

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 16, 2012

Intensely reflective look back on life as it compares to nature and what is nature if not life itself. Nicely done.
fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 16, 2012

Wonderful cohesion within the framework of this one,Vivian. The leaves are your barometer it seems to me, and always the green leaf to celebrate your glorious life, until, of course even it turns brown. Fantastic poetry, even better than usual.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 16, 2012

Your poem has a sense of yearning to it. A hopefulness that the green leaves will last a long time and that the coming of autumn will be warm and mild until the last leaf turns. There is peace and solitude too, welcoming the days to come.

Ron