Once in a while a day comes
along and turns me topsy turvy
please join me for the wild
and crazy ride
The cake is in the oven and
destiny rises its fate to be
evermore tasty
Have a delicious day before
its done and there is some
explaining to do
(c) Personal and Confidential
18August2012
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2012
I like that novel idea of a cake having a destiny to be tasty: baking has taken on a completely new slant after this. It's probably best to have a delicious day before you have to do some explaining. Made me smile.
If you remember the old episodes of "I Love Lucy"...I can see this is quite personal and meant for the eyes of someone-special-type poem as I read it, but..."Lucy, ju got sum 'Splaining to do!"
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Lily
Topsy turvy..yep and my cake didn't get a blue ribbon in 4-H.
Cute poem to smile and giggle about the wild and crazy ride.
Lady Mary Ann
:) Janna
Deborah
very clever...indeed, just read "Exit
of Beauty" for the clues to this mystery
Lady Vivian
budd