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Closed on Mondays
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Closed on Mondays 

Following instincts can enable ability
to accomplish extraordinary things

Contrary

Blind optimism can lead us into
unstable territory much like a
closed restaurant when a mind
full of food for thought is needed

(c) Closed on Mondays
17September2012
Vivian L Dawson

 


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 Reviews of "Closed on Mondays"
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2012
The flare in the finish was delectable, Vivian. "...when a mind/full of food for thought is needed." Prancing pony of a poem ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 18, 2012
Extraordinary...made me go back and read this over and over, I do trust my instincts, but there have been times I have been blindsided as well..great poem~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 18, 2012
Lovely wisdom to contemplate...
fee

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2012
It's funny how a few well penned lines can make you stop and examine the meaning of words. Many of us would admit to defining instinct and optimism fairly synonymously. On reflection they are miles apart as you cleverly point out.

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on September 18, 2012
A great write my friend and I sure like the photo as well done indeed Laura

Reviewed on September 18, 2012
Instinct vs intuition and should be listened to

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 18, 2012
i'll choose instincts any day over everything else;
good way of seeing here, Vivian, and i like the Monday
image very much

john

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2012
VIVIAN, GOOD CHOICE OF WORDS...ANOTHER GOOD POEM TO SHARE...ANNA

Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2012
yep, you are right, such as BRAD,S BAR B Q. LOL HG

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2012
Well said, nice poem...Most places are closed on Mondays...

Reviewed on September 17, 2012
No actually everything was closed this monday. Schools.(teacher workshop day ). Very cool poem.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 17, 2012
this is a very interesting and correct set of phrases Vivian
budd

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on September 17, 2012
Lady Vivian ~
Splendid thoughts of philosophical optimism.
A day of shopping and oh my, the lovely resturant is
closed on Monday's !!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 17, 2012
Amen! I've been known to follow that blind optimism down some pretty sticky situation. Some even dangerous. After all that I still, at these my declining years have to guard against it. Good philosophical writing, Vivian.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2012
Enjoyed throughly,Vivian...I'm sure most of us have experienced that blindness that takes us out of our realm into another with all kinds
of consequences.

Deborah


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