A light that does not deter
by rain, sleet or snow
within my celestial range
a distant cry I'm hearing for
a healing.. for as your path
grows dark.. I will be there
Unlocking a door on a
higher plane that takes you
where my spirit can now
be with you once more
But should the time come
I do not appear.. my forever
light I leave in your heart
will be your guide always
to places with which to grow
while still cherishing the time
when our love was carefree
(c) I Will be There
01October2012
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2012
just plain lovely------------ hg
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2012
Powerful words: "...for as your path/grows dark....I will be there." That is support language to wear like a locket. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2012
It is the support of friends and lovers that gets us through dark times. Often that support is unspoken but on this occasion you have articulated it beautifully.
To know that someone "is there" for you, whether it be a lover, relative or friend, is truly a sacred trust and a trait to be admired. Deeply poignant words that touch the heart.
For when they find one another in their time
there will be a glorious reuniting a light
that will fill the room and the hearts of
many for they will be a testament for others
and great teachers...
I feel that this could be for a child, a lover, or a dear friend. It is a lovely promise. Whoever it is, or could be, they are lucky you are behind it. Lovely work. Be well, Kathy
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Joy L. Hale
Lovely celestial poem unique cherishing in heart and spirit.
Lady Mary Ann
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Deborah
there will be a glorious reuniting a light
that will fill the room and the hearts of
many for they will be a testament for others
and great teachers...
Beautiful
Love and Light
Lily
budd