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Just when
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~Just when~

Thinking life is over and done
see yourself an open book
becoming likened to a butterfly
awakening to soar with all the
beauty of conscious freedom

(c) Just when
27November2012
Vivian L Dawson

 
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 Reviews of "Just when"
Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on December 6, 2012
wow-great poem--I envy anyone who knows you beyond the Den--I think you must be a great friend to have--well done
Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on December 2, 2012
So beautifully written and such a stunning photo Laura
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
That's a great image, book pages being opened/butterfly taking wing. The word picture on it's own makes this little jewel.
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
We are all butterfly's
we only need to put fear aside
and break free from our cocoon that
held all we are...

Lovely

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
this one suits your image to a -t- ...but sometimes unconscious freedom... the freedom to dream in repose is a mighty fine thing too!

Roger
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
I reawaken every morning, but its getting harder to soar.

Ron
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
an open book within yourself is how it should be, fly and soar dear lady
budd
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
Marvelous - Soar On!
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
Beautiful.....and true...:) best wishes,neerja
Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
Words written so powerfully; a beautiful job. Well done, Vivian.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
beautiful allegory, Vivian ...
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
Lady Vivian,
You have awakened the soul of the butterfly.
Beautifully penned.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
Repeating what Diana said, with the empathizing on moremoremore / I'm featuring myself as a butterfly / Isn't hard to do.
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
You are definitely on a roll, Vivian. happythankyoumoreplease ~~ Diana
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