Beauty to be determined
strokes be enlightenment
science need not prove
Beware the shinning thru
language of the eyes
foretelling what is inside
revealing if beauty within
(c) Paint Your Life
14January2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2013
I believe that the saying "The eyes are the windows to the soul" has been shown to have some basis in fact. Perhaps we do not have to beware the language of the eyes, particularly if we have inner beauty.
I like how this reads for me like a riddle. These four words spread out an entire philosophy: "revealing if beauty within" The clippedness just works! ~~ Diana
Your words flow as beautifully as silk softly blowing in the breeze. Your poetry demonstrates how to look within for the truest beauty. Ah, but the eyes always tell the true story, don't they? The photo you have used is mesmerizing and most exotic.
Ah, science is ill equipped to see behind the eyes and discover the beauty of love and all its consequences. But you know, Vivian, I know that you know.
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Beauty within the mirroed eyes compells a glimpse
into the soul. Lovely image to paint your verses.
Lady Mary Ann
Lady Vivian :)
Love and Light
Lily
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Joy L. Hale