Silence in stillness
refreshing boundless
frightening no more
doubts disconnecting
confronting any inner
shallowness, unabated
virtue..ignoring burden
of anxieties over and
over until it becomes
reality..requiting love
(c)of Repose
16January2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2013
Vivian, It all builds up and adds up to "of Repose" where the reality of the whole thing sets in.
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2013
HG
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2013
This describes very well a journey from suspicion to serenity; it has a staccato tempo that should not suit the subject but for some reason works very well. I rather like this.
Uh, this was a difficult poem to read, Vivian, it took me at least five minutes to quit staring at that lovely photo.
Okay. I finally stopped drooling and read your well written poem. Take any two lines and you can readily see that there is a bit of revenge in the making. That's my take.
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Always,
Deborah
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Okay. I finally stopped drooling and read your well written poem. Take any two lines and you can readily see that there is a bit of revenge in the making. That's my take.
Regis
Love the picture to describe your feelings too
Love and Light
Lily