A force to be reckoned
I am your conscious at the
heart of your soul to love
and be loved freely as the
spirits uplifting in a wind
blowing beautifully gentle
through your mind can attest
Beware the tempest of your
subconscious who hauntingly
whispers unhappiness knowing
neither right or wrong of it
Calm the seas with your heart
and choose to share the flow
for another's to come in
(c) Seas White with Foam
09February2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2013
remembering your saying, live love and laugh------ hg
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2013
Conscious and subconscious calm the turmoil with your heart and share flowing of love without listening to your subconscious...
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2013
This has an unusual construction but it works, I like the way the imagery is matched with the verse structure. An enduring theme.
If we all could calm the tempest of our souls, we would probably lead very boring lives. On the other hand, I would rather have that, than stormy seas.
Good advice here, Vivian. Don't shut the door to happiness just because you've had a bad situation arise and left you feeling blue. There is always someone else, the right one, just around the corner, never give up looking for happiness.
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
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Always,
Deborah
lurking somewhere at the back of the mind..
the final three lines are sage, Vivian
john
Blessings,
Christine
Beautifully gentle spirits to share the love of heart.
Lovely chosen image for your profile~~
Lady Mary Ann
Cheers,
Dan
Ron
budd