Sun's fizzling solar flares, roaring waves
or the eerie melodic shimmer of a whistler in
the magnetosphere as Mr burns the day away
ending with magnificent glowing sunset viewing
But what of allurement happening in the night as
the moon's fairy fire of glistening gems listening
so pensively for the sound of lovers becoming
music for the moon where in behold a harp full
of melodic wafting of grace as it illuminates gleam
in circle for life when clouds give way to the Lady
(c) Mr Sun and Lady Moon
24February2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
I just love it when a piece of writing takes me off in an unexpected direction. I spent a good hour reading about magnetospheres, bow shocks solar winds and Aurora Borealis. Your work is never boring.
~Lady Vivian~
Beautiful the cords of the harp she plays for the sun and moon
enhance the melodic drifts of tenderness to love. Unique and mystic
your pen of glowing arched beams.
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Beautiful the cords of the harp she plays for the sun and moon
enhance the melodic drifts of tenderness to love. Unique and mystic
your pen of glowing arched beams.
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