~Vibrato in Journey~ Imitation by vocals
characterized of two
raised or lowered
perceptual properly
your path anew
Perfect pitch created
following or evading
in voice played by
ear addressing issues
Oh sweetly answering
heightened of wisteria
resonating in surround
sound forward to follow
orchestration in process
(c) Vibrato in Journey
14April2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2013
" Vibrato in Journey," to me is a couple falling in love and following the motions, talking and displaying words of love.
The wisteria adds the sweetness of what love is or can be.
Quite beautiful, Vivian!
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2013
The alliteration contributes nicely to your musical piece. Perfectly pitched.
The experience of natural grandeur of wisteria alley
and irresistible beauty of your poem, Vivian, works
magic...provoking a lot of thoughts and emotions...
...taking us on that romantic/perfect day out...dreaming.
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2013
I have a butterfly sensation reading this poem, Vivian. Your words combine to make a fresh mix of motion and music. Quite lovely to my eyes and ears. ~~ Diana
All that wisteria does for me is make me think of old, rundown places, reeking of death. But then, that's just me. You appear to be turned on by that purple flower.
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The wisteria adds the sweetness of what love is or can be.
Quite beautiful, Vivian!
Always,
Deborah
Sweetly the notes vibrato journey through the heart.
Beautiful the walk of two hearts. Wisteria, love it!
Lady Mary Ann
and irresistible beauty of your poem, Vivian, works
magic...provoking a lot of thoughts and emotions...
...taking us on that romantic/perfect day out...dreaming.
Ron
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Best wishes,neerja