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Mini the Verse
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~Mini the Verse~

Hanging out in the rut of pothole
where grass grows green and 
essentials hang clean via a
clothespin


(c) Mini the Verse
26May2013
Vivian L Dawson

 



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 Reviews of "Mini the Verse"
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
Finally something good to say about potholes; and it takes some imagination to mine that thought. Took my mind off damaged suspensions.

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on May 29, 2013
Love the symbolism of your poem, Vivian.
We downgrade all the time, keeping the "green
familiarity" of mind...intact...pretending
everything is sensible and sane.
The Art of Successful Survival does not involve
tracking down the one source of logic...we know,
but it involves learning to accept...with grace,
the endlessly...paradoxical nature of existence.
Keeping in mind...your sense of imagination...humor
and integrity...is your greatest commodity...your true
...your only friend.
With warm regards Isabella.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
...this puts an intriguing spin on the clothes... they say the clothes make the man (or woman), but if 'diminutive' cuts the figure to ground an expectation like that contained herein the lines of this verse, the subject looms larger than life in more ways than one... again and again, you never cease to amuse and amaze, dearest Vivian.

Roger

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
A mini "theatre of the absurd" where readers are left to find meaning in a setting that is nonsensical. A good test of the sincerity of readers.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
~Lady Vivian~
A cute poem! Lov'in the essentials hung by a clothespin!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
Nice use of a pothole!

Ron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
Yes! Thank you for sharing, Vivian. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
you could not have expressed this....any better than...you did...love it, anna

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
how perfect is this, great
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 28, 2013
Hah! Gotta love it.


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