~Falling Down Going Up~ Losing upright position suddenly coming
down freely under the influence of gravity
originally standing tall but appropriate to
season of fall
Lower to higher gaining wind movement
positioning feelings of exuberance you
came up and kissed me above horizon
just as the moon encircled our love
Therein "She whispers, I'm afraid of falling down~As He smiles, I'll catch you"
(c) Falling Down Going Up 03June2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
Must remember to always kiss a girl above the horizon, I do like an unintended meaning. Come to think of it, your poem could bee read any number of ways.
Often......a situation needs to be the way
it is...so...that...later...it becomes what
it needs...desire...to become.
Your vivid/visionary poem...Vivian...proves the point.
With warm regards Isabella.
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2013
I'd love to fall down through the vista of years with poetry as Vivid, dearest Vivian, as this one. I might, were I the guy, have been inclined to whisper back, "The down is soft to cushion the fall, let's fall together, the downer the better!"
Still as a windswept moment, calm as a placid take on a lake, sure as a lover's smile, these are a few of the falls I leave in my wake.
Ahh . . . The title captured me and caused me to recall a book I read many years ago (the sixties) by the name of "Up the Down Staircase." Of course your poetry isn't anything like the book it reminded me of. Falling in love is like losing touch with the reality of gravity, and such seems to be the case here, but the last two lines are the ones which cement the relationship I'm thinking. Nice work, Vivian.
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about being into of the world!!
Listening to Your Love Whisperer
Vickie
falling down~As He smiles, I'll catch you"
Love truly is a many splendored thing.
Ron
Cheers,
Dan
it is...so...that...later...it becomes what
it needs...desire...to become.
Your vivid/visionary poem...Vivian...proves the point.
With warm regards Isabella.
Still as a windswept moment, calm as a placid take on a lake, sure as a lover's smile, these are a few of the falls I leave in my wake.
Still a fan after all these years.
Roger
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