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Beware Undertow
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~Beware Undertow~ Footsteps muffled into silence sand sifts through heart beats teal and turquoise swirl about seaweed beaches closed dangerous public swimming Only a conch speaks to ears willing to pick up for noisy waves white with foam within a sleeping land free to roam (c) Beware Undertow 07June2013 Vivian L Dawson

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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on June 10, 2013

An apt reminder, those Photoshopped waves will catch out the unwary. You have crammed a lot of images into such a copmact little piece.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 9, 2013

I was sucked in by this and carried out to where I think I drowned in it. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on June 9, 2013

~Lady Vivian~
Teal and turquoise swirl your verses of the waves
conch speaks..free land to roam. Beautiful~~

Ldy Mary Ann

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 9, 2013

Quite interesting - both poem and pic.

Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

ahhhhhhhhhh yes, but wished we were 5 2 5 miles south now !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hg

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

wow vivian, this is a wonderful write...another number 10 ...anna

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

Beware indeed...this is an awesome write.
Cheers,

Dan

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

yes keep to stay to the sand and not stray to near, so beautiful in every way
budd

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

I enjoy how your lines entwine- Vivian you are not on your way, You Are Here!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

The poem and picture are a gem. quite unique.

George

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 8, 2013

Ah . . . The title sez it all, Vivian, my friend, no matter the endearing enchantments and soft whispering into your ear, always, and I mean always, keep a sharp lookout for that creeping undertow.

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