Between life's tracks
conductor yells all aboard
density changing for rain
to fall on any stop accepting
picking daisy petals one
by one to know ending
beyond caboose he
loves me for this I grow
propelled long distance
viable by rights of way
(c) Rolling Highways
14June2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2013
Most writers extol the merits of the other side of the tracks but you have brought a shot of reality in this piece. Life is mostly lived between the lines and the constant quest to predict outcomes is well represented here.
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2013
"Between life's tracks", those three words encompasses one's whole life.
Vivian, you are an amazing woman!!
A way to use your mind for silent communication. Speaking about the methods in the book I have used since a young age.
21st Century learning. I also have a GoFundMe page to ask for funds so I can research with other people and add their experiences
A way to use your mind for silent communication. Speaking about the methods in the book I have used since a young age.
21st Century learning. I also have a GoFundMe page to ask for funds so I can research with other people and add their experiences
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Vivian, you are an amazing woman!!
Always,
Deborah
this is a sweet ride Lady Vivian
even in the rain...
All Around Love Tracks
& The Lost Luggage
Vickie
Love & peace be with you
William
budd
Sweet destiny..daisies forever to pick the petals..
All aboard the daisy express!! Enjoyed~~
Lady Mary Ann
Ron