Width and depth of breath
twisting trees in expectation
with
flights of fantasy
allowing sun at bay for
awakening
as
spiritual beings having
a human experience
quieting mind turning
on the sun
within
doves fluttering
contentment;
flowing robe she seeks warmth of her lover’s touch expectation her hands reach behind to feel his presence he caresses kisses soft lips embrace fluttering hearts eyes shut ecstasy.
This collaboration is bearing fruit in terms of structure and narritive. Poetry has to be painstakingly hewn from the language and those two aspects are the cornerstones of any poem.
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2013
A bright suffusion of imagery married amid exquisite emotional release... create a sublime presence of mind and matter in a mating of mutual souls, an entwining of energies physical and spiritual, binding the tangible with the intangible in intriguing juxtapositions, as stanzas echo stanzas and sound echoes sense. Sensational!
You have perceived a heart filled with love which bloomed amid the statuesque and even grotesque trees. The woman is alone, but leave it to the romance which is within you, you gave the same to her to her. Eloquent.
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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Simply beautiful Vivian and Lance!
Always,
Deborah