solitude to be delivered
from
anguish of loneliness
by
fountains of enchantment
to drink
away
wounded hearts
out of darkness
with
no bitter after taste
once beyond
prisms
crystal light
respectfully restricting
webs of deceit
vistas truthful
of looking
through
panes renewal
webs
removed
(c) Window re Dressing
17September2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2013
Interesting construction; only 5 verbs. That gives this a certain shorthand quality, a kind of verbal economy. There is a kind of sparseness that adds impact.
Heartbreak and tearful memories, are the result of "anguish of loneliness." Cry tears until there are no more. Wipe eyes and continue to live for the day.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2013
ah, vivian,,,another wonderful piece of work...a tear to the eye, too. love anna
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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Love & peace be with you
William
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