Between the kites and the children (who fly high in their own right), and the eagles, this is quite a festive poem, perfect for a spring day, the kind of day one wishes would never end. Nice touches here and definitely upbeat. John
You word-painted an excellent poem, Jane. I know the feeling, and although Bayou Lafourche is far cry from your lake up there, or an ocean, it is quite awesome as far as I am concerned. Take these kind of days and bring them out from your hiding place and visit with them when days become bothersome.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Wishing you an abundance of creativity!
With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby
Or was that a different kind of bird?
Never mind.
And As Your Dreams Will Make It
(Your Sky Fun) Come True...
TRASK...
Ron