The style, rhyme flow, phrases and imagery that totally support the theme are artistically wonderful and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing, Jane. Love, blessings and faith...joyce * His Inspirations
Unfortunately, your romantic take on relationship start has been reduced in the 21st to "wanna hook up?" Sadly the age of intimate images, like your poem depicts, is an endangered principal. Good write.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Ron
The embers of lust burned hot.
Whispering sweet nothings,
Subtle sexiness hits the spot.