Rene' Lyn (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Rene' Lyn
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Rene’ Lyn… No distance too great, No time too late, Our love will transcend fate, We are forever and always each other’s soulmate...J Though my travels take me sometimes a great distance, Our love continues with great persistence, If not for you my love, my life would just be existence, With your love I need no food; you are my subsistence…J You have put up with me when I am in a mood, Listened to my ranting and raving till I do conclude, When you are near I do never try to you elude, When together we never with each other fight and feud…J You are MY Rene’ Lyn, To live without you would most certainly be sin, We see very little of each other, much to my chagrin, We both work hard so one day together we can be like that of a twin…J © ed ~ 6/28/05

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Oh, Eddie M... this is just 'weepy-pretty' from your big, 7 foot person! She has a happy face and obviously deserves your best pen. God, there are few things in life more just-plain-cool than a man who speaks openly of his love... bares his emotions... writes his feelings. You are both simply lovely. (smile) katy xox

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 1, 2005

superb!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2005

Three cheers for Rene Lyn, a saint for sure. LOL

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Beautiful write Ed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

She is a sweety! Lovely romantic write :-)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

beautiful write, ed; she reminds me a little of my maman (my daddy's wife, my step mother; i call her maman!) in her smile and face! a beautiful woman she is! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Ed,

Now how could Rene' Lyn not love this heartfelt tribute? Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...hope you show it to her, and thank you for sharing a lovely write!

((((HUGS)))) to you both (and to the Rufster), Karla. :)

WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!