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Naked Night in the Tropics
by Mary Deal → (All Poetry by Mary Deal)
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This poem was published in the Introduction of my novel, "The Tropics."

Moonlight glistens on the frosted jalousies
making them seem like bars on the windows,
but horizontal and scintillating,
very freeing,
as tradewinds waft into the room
and billow the curtains.
I breathe in response,
hear the rhythm of the surf,
and lay spread eagle, uncovered,
falling asleep knowing moonlight
will slow dance across my bed,
washing over my naked body,
with its rhythm as the moon shifts
in the sky
from one window to another
projecting a square of radiance
that distorts and elongates
as the reflection slips
around the room
which becomes lighter with the rising sun;
moonlight awash with sunlight merging,
when I’ll wake and rise and walk into the glowing
and stretch in a bath of light. 

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 Reviews of "Naked Night in the Tropics"
Reviewed by un ted
Reviewed on December 25, 2014
visual and seductive, now i want to visit that place for myself! Thank you.

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on September 29, 2012
very nice

Reviewed by Richard Nedervelt (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2011
Aloha, Mary. It was wonderful chatting with you and Ronald today. It was such a wonderful experience and I appreciate everything you both had to share. I just read this poem and found it breathtaking with all of its many many layers. Whether from a sensual interpretation or an awakening, or even as a passing poem, this poem reveals so much so wonderfully. Thanks and keep up the words. :-) Richard

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on December 21, 2009
Nicely done. One can visualize a wonderful night in the tropics.
Florida is not too bad either. However I have been to The Islands a few times and it is special. Where does one go to have this vision?

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
I feel awsh in discriptive detail, wonderful!!!!! Sandi

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 6, 2008
Hearing the surf, lying near the ocean, a dream of mine forever. You painted a lovely scene and a beautiful night into morning.

Reviewed on May 5, 2008
love your verse Mary, it is sexy, sensual and heart throbbing

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
the images in the poem painted pictures on my mind-well done!

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on February 26, 2007
"stretch in a bath of light"

Very beautiful work Mary!

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by J.L. Day
Reviewed on January 9, 2007
Perfectly tantalizing, suprisingly mesmerizing, definately appetizing. I adored this piece!

Reviewed by Bhakta Giri (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
A sensual one and i like it. Good blend of metaphors of similies. Thanx for sharing.
Bhakta

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Most beautiful poem. Well worded and excellent write.

Greetings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on August 26, 2003
a very tender and sensual poem....very well done!

Reviewed by Jim McClellan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
celestial. at one with the night, garbless and taking it in. wonderful write!

Mac =)

Reviewed by Austin Akalanze
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
sort of sensual. got me ...!

Reviewed by Ronald Dondiego
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Oh, this was really beautiful - sensual and mysterious. Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2003
Hi- Mary- I've spent some time in Brazil and Fiji and other such places and you capture
the sensual feel and cool, cool luxury of that sweet slumber very well indeed. I enjoyed it. When you have time read my Long Gone Love and Old Souls. You'll like them. I'll be reading you. Jerry

Reviewed on January 13, 2003
There are two things I love:
soulful poetry and rhythmic poetry.
Both are here.

Reviewed by Anwer Sher (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2003
awesome in a simple word

Reviewed on October 8, 2002
very good write!!


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